Tuesday 3 February 2015

MODERATED MOCK EXAM FEEDBACK



Yesterday we received feedback on our previous Mock exams. Initially when my teacher marked it I scored 45 marks which gave me an A* but now that it has been moderated by the head of media department my mark has been reduced to 39/50. I was impressed by my essay on representation of women in media because unlike the essays I wrote last year, I included theories to explain my points and I analysed examples a little bit more. However, there is always room for improvement and I will be implementing the feedback given to me by the moderator in my upcoming mock exams. She advised me to give specific examples and analyse historic and future prospects regarding the topic. My writing skills were good according to her feedback and my essay was well structured therefore I don't necessarily need to change it but slight improvements can increase my grade. Putting her advice into practice and with my knowledge from the previous mock, I will hopefully write a better essay this mock and get better grades. 

Friday 30 January 2015

PRODUCTION DIARY WEEK 21

This past week I have been contemplating on my production setbacks and have developed a new idea to eliminate the problem of actor unreliability. I have decided to play both the parts of the Radical Muslim and the Moderate Muslim woman. This will mean that I will have to wear both costumes and act both parts then edit it to create the film. This coming week I will start working on the Film poster for my short film after carrying out research into existing film posters relating to Islam to have an idea of what layout, image size, font style, colour scheme and house style to use.